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Saw you see me
Smiling at me
Could feel your love
With sadness coupled
You want to say something
I can just sense it
Words fail as your
Eyes glisten with unshed tears
Then, I see them
The angels from above
They have come to take you
To your heavenly abode
I cry out,
Voice dying out in my throat
I try to reach out
You are already afloat
There is a deep void
Can give anything
To hear your voice
All I taste is the
Salt in my tears
As you leave your fragrance behind.
For - Day 12....NaPoWriMo
it really hurts when something/someone u love go away
ReplyDeleteIt hurts for a very long time Jyoti.
DeleteBeautiful cry, lovely.
ReplyDeleteCould so feel your pain and loss in this beautiful, touching poem.
ReplyDeleteevocative...what is left behind...scents can be just like that too..linger and bring back the memories...heart felt write...
ReplyDeleteThis was endearing and touching. Losing someone is a sorrow we all have to bear. The memories will keep us going though. Thanks for this.
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Thank you Tameka.
DeleteDear Janu,
ReplyDeleteI can so relate to this, having just attended my brother-in-law's funeral a couple of days ago. Very nicely penned. Thanks for sharing.
Day 11/12: Kiss Of Faithfulness
Thanks Andy.
DeleteVery touching. It's never easy to lose someone you love.
ReplyDeleteI can feel the pain through your words. It is always a difficult process to lose someone that we hold dear to our heart.
ReplyDeleteTrue Mary...thanks.
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